I think that Yummy should've been more alert and smarter and knew what they were up to or at least should've stayed and waited for his granny and listened to her when she said stay where he was.
@ Yvette- I think that Yummy was to vulnerable to think that anything was going to happen to him!
If i had to write another part of "Yummy" it would be like this: After yummy dies Rogers brother goes back to the Black Disciples & stand up for Yummy & askes them why did they shoot & kill yummy. I would also put in the story that his mom stoped doing drugs after Yummy died.
If i wrote an alternate part it would have to be the part where Yummy goes home and turns himself in after he calls his grandma to pick him up. He would get locked up and spend his time for the crime he commited. Then he would get a good education and live a successful life.
@ Eliza-I think that this would be a good ending because it shows that since Yummy died it made an impact on others.
@ Eliza- That would be a crazy ending. It would probaly end up with both Roger and his brother dead on the streets, but that would be very heroic.